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Hopeless Romantic... NOT
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Hopeless Romantic... NOT |
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nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
Okay, you know I'm not a hopeless romantic And my words are often dark, what can I say You know I've never looked for a prince charming I'm certainly not the type to fall for that cliche So listen carefully to my words I refuse to say this twice Reality is, I don't know how I would have lived If you hadn't been in my life And if it's possible to feel love so young That must be what I feel for you I guess it was inevitable After all that we went through But don't you dare tell anyone They might take this as a weakness So just for now, until the war is over It can be our little secret Yeah tell anyone and I'll slap you mad And don't even give me that smile I'm not going weak at the knees And your touch won't drive me wild You know I'm a not hopeless romantic So I hope you listened well Because that's the only time you'll hear it And you better swear not to tell |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol i like this one! alot! yeah i'll slap the kid who ate all my cookies mad too! no but seriously, good poem, the flow was a little rough in some places but i liked it over all! : ) |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
hoo ate all the cookies i will get them also. i will hunt the cookie eating thief down past th ends of the earth, well maybe. but kinda funny but good but interesting but ironic poem i guess. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i liked this one a lot it had a nice flow and i thought it was funny and very emotional as well... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyable read. I liked this one!  ~Alli~ |
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