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rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

0 posted 2007-04-03 11:19 PM

Soo... I haven't been here in a long time, and this isn't my best writing, but its better than a lot of stuff I've written lately...
It's kind of about a friend of mine and a fight we had...

go ahead.
just ignore me.
I don't care-
much.
I have so much I could tell you,
if you were hearing what I say.
I know so many things that
you'd never think of when you think of me.
most of them would shock you,
and so would what I say.
that sweet tempered little angel
that you used to think was me
has thrown away illusion,
and locked away the key
to her heart, and
it's frozen.
she's taken off the halo,
and her horns begun to grow.
those wings you used to love
have molted, to return no more.
don't you love a rebel?
that's what they call me now.
of course they think I'm happy.
I'm smiling, see?
I'm smiling-
but it's only pasted on.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-04-04 07:30 PM

interesting, i like parts of it alot, but then you go off a little bit, then you come back on. overall great job and i hope to read more in the future.

soundtech
New Member

since 2008-01-18

Posts 3
va

2 posted 2008-07-04 11:41 PM

good job babe i love u

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-07-07 07:48 PM

haha that was intruiguing. i kinda liked it, a lot.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2008-07-08 11:45 PM

You're not the only one who's been absent. Lol, its nice to read your writing again.

Poetry is art.

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

5 posted 2008-07-11 01:54 PM

well done! I can relate to this

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