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Teen Poetry #8

Don't need 20/20 Vision

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2008-07-10 06:44 PM

Don't need 20/20 Vision

Though you are far, when I hear your breath,
it's like you're next to me.

For you, I would reach up
and spell my love in the stars.
Then, even on the darkest night,
you would see my love,
sparkling in the sky.

They say to thear is to see.
So when I hear your quiet giggle,
I smile a smile beyond sight.

As I write this, I wonder:
When will we meet?
Then, I laugh.
I know I don't need 20/20 vision to see
that I still love you.

Am I delirious? Maybe.
But isn't love a little crazy?

7/10/08

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2008-07-10 10:06 PM

I loved this...it's so sweet. I only wish that a guy would feel that way for me lol. I can dream right? Nicely written Mr. Assassin

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2008-07-11 12:38 PM

Thanks. I've been in a relationship (long-distance) relationship for the past 7 weeks and I'm really happy! ^_^ And don't worry! You'll find someone! If I found someone, anyone can...

And please, call me Andrew or AoV.

There is power in the pen.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-07-11 10:45 AM

Wow, this is breathtaking (is that one word?). At one point in time someone felt that about me too, great job!

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

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