Teen Poetry #8 |
Don't need 20/20 Vision |
Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Don't need 20/20 Vision Though you are far, when I hear your breath, it's like you're next to me. For you, I would reach up and spell my love in the stars. Then, even on the darkest night, you would see my love, sparkling in the sky. They say to thear is to see. So when I hear your quiet giggle, I smile a smile beyond sight. As I write this, I wonder: When will we meet? Then, I laugh. I know I don't need 20/20 vision to see that I still love you. Am I delirious? Maybe. But isn't love a little crazy? 7/10/08 |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I loved this...it's so sweet. I only wish that a guy would feel that way for me lol. I can dream right? Nicely written Mr. Assassin If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were. |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Thanks. I've been in a relationship (long-distance) relationship for the past 7 weeks and I'm really happy! ^_^ And don't worry! You'll find someone! If I found someone, anyone can... And please, call me Andrew or AoV. There is power in the pen. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Wow, this is breathtaking (is that one word?). At one point in time someone felt that about me too, great job! ~*Julianna*~ |
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