Teen Poetry #8 |
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Rockin' Around Hollywood (Worth A Look If You Feel Like A Laugh) |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia ![]() |
Someday I want to be a rock star, singing my own songs Standing on a stage in blue jeans and a pair of thongs Singing to an audience who’s shouting out my name Knowing I’m on a one-way ticket to money, love and fame Jessica Simpson will cry tears when she sees me in the street I’ll be holding hands with John Mayer and swaying to the beat To the beat of her broken heart as it breaks into two Daddy cant save you this time he’s with Pamela Anderson at the zoo Hilary duff will be heartbroken when I raise my voice And she will realize soon enough she made the wrong choice She should of stayed with Joel, they could have had a kid But now she will sit wishing that they really did Mary-Kate will be turning in her size 8 shoes When she finds out just how much weight Oprah did loose She’s been trying very hard to get rid of all her weight But I just pray to god she wakes up to herself before its too late Britney Spears will sing again with her best mate Justin Timberlake will dump Cameron to take Britney on a date The two will get hitched and have 2 baby boy’s They will spend their Friday night playing with their kinky toys Celebrities and superstardom isn’t what I want to be I just want be a rock star singing out with glee I don’t want fancy shoes or tiny little dresses And I sure as hell don’t want lawyers sorting out my messes If I could be a rock star, I’d give away my money Give to the poor who celebrities find funny I’m not going to be like Britney, or Anorexic like Mary-Kate But If you make me a rock star I’ll take George Bush on a date |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Haha I needed a laugh or two! Good work right here, gee its been a long time coming for something funny. I think this poem will put a few smiles on ppls faces on here ![]() Peace - Spirit |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow this made me laugh it was so true and I really like the end hehe.. tx for the laugh... hunnie ![]() ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Me...Myself New Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 4 |
i just lov whateva u write .... amazin.. i read it...re-read it.. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
wow...i wish you would dance in a thong jess! lol |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks all.. Me... Myself i have never seen you before but yea im glad you like my work.. And CO.. in your dreams matey.. ![]() |
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TayJay01 New Member
since 2007-04-24
Posts 9 |
well i loved it it made me laugh and thats always good so lets get a little closer noww<33 |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
haha that was great i loved how it rhymed and had stars that we all have heard of in it very good for a laugh keep writing |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You did an excellent job on this piece, and now have a new fan in me as well. well done indeed, and beautifully rhymed. |
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strike.the.match New Member
since 2007-04-22
Posts 3 |
wowees i loved keep on it was relly good xx raindrops on roses in girls in white dresses. p!atd xxx |
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