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Teen Poetry #8

Take Me Away

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-11-17 02:34 PM

i breath in so deeply
and then exhale all the pain
the twisted way the world works
makes me wish it would rain

i want it to pour down
and drown me in the cold
i wish it would swallow me
and never let me go
breath in, breath out
look out below
im just a fraction
and never the whole

it hurts too much to scream
please dont make me bleed
im on my knees begging please
take me away

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-11-17 02:38 PM

"it hurts too much to scream
please dont make me bleed
im on my knees begging please
take me away"

Wow, i can't say how many times i've felt this way. Loved this

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2007-11-17 08:29 PM

Love ur work always have... this is just another breath taking piece from my fav American poet

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-18 10:45 AM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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