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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
parting is such sweet sorrow to not wake upon the morrow to depart this life,unto the next never to again take in a breath what would one do in the land of the dead if there is no where to go and no words to be said freedom comes with its price eternally free but without life the loved ones left behind back home must find some way to not be alone take comfort from the memories embrace the lost who are now free |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
this was deep, almost sensationable. i loved it alot and i love this website. i know this guy who used to be on here a while ago, i think he said his screen name was temptless or tempest... i cant really remember which. |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
Jordu this is amazing. I particularly like this one because its short and simple but at the same time theres so much depth and complexity in it |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I know brian(temptest_ he left.. He got kicked off its sad |
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shannonbaker Junior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 12 |
beautifully written |
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