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Seeing you |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
It hurts to know you're moving on, that the love you had for me is gone, I saw you yesterday you walked right by, I was invisible to you and I even know why, you used to love me but I didn't love you, you tried to deny it but I think you knew, when I said no it broke your heart, I didn't know it would tear us apart, We used to be friends I told you every thought, but since I didn't love you like that out friendship was shot, so you're with someone else I guessed I missed out, and all I can say is that's what loves about. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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pip_man Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 70Canada |
I loved this poem. I know I can really relate to it. Great write! "When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." |
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River Of Tears Junior Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 25Canada! |
Really great read! I loved it, made me think about what I am going through with my friends right now. I am me, And always will be, If you think you can change me, Take a better look cause, I am happy as me! |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Actually brought tears to my eyes. (Thinking of old BF)I really liked this poem alot. Wonderful hunnie! Luv Kira ~Should the truth be so buried |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
Wow. That was such a good write. I loved the way it wasn't just a soppy love poem but it told a story. The more I read, the more it revealed, the more I liked. I can relate to this. Well done! Belinda_* |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Awe thanks everyone for you're replies... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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