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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Walking down the lonely street Remembering my broken dreams Step by step, I pace on home Again I am leaving alone Never forgetting all my crushed hopes Even I don’t know how I really cope Beginning to sprint as Tears threaten to fall I contort my hips to avoid hitting the wall Unable to contain My emotions all this pain My run becomes a contest against myself How much more do I have to do this till I am well? only way to stop my heart from crying out keep my head from pounding, eliminates any self doubt words run in lines all through out my mind “Gotta keep going, gotta keep tryin” voices of the ones I love, speak to my innermost core as the wind’s whispering song plays, I can forget before my feet step down in time to beating of my pulsing veins all my sorrow flies away on the breeze, there goes that pain just flickers of the memories of hurt are all that remain my eyes no longer glittering wet just as it starts to rain cascading drops of water as they splatter, speak "gotta keep going, gotta keep trying, don’t be weak" out of breath got to stop, coming back all my unease Maybe its time to finish it, just admit to my defeat reaching into my pocket, pulling out a silver tipped blade trying to convince me, that memories of me will fade and disappear of the face of the earth, BS voices in my soul sounding loud, a caress to my confused and ripped heart, I hear disgust and scorn in the voices, of my disbelief, that I am that forlorn I know I never could, complete that thought or stare My fingers open, the knife falls, people would care I stand up tall for the first time in awhile Found innocent in a drawn out trial I begin to race, down the street Relighting extinguished dreams Voices will whisper in my ear not again, no more Instead I hear the song of the ones I love in through my very core I walk up distantly familiar steps Confidence of a girl possessed by who was her all along Just needed help to be strong. |
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nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
Yet another amazing poem by you. I really liked it. Fantastic job. Enchor!! I really liked the stanza: "I know I never could, complete that thought or stare My fingers open, the knife falls, people would care I stand up tall for the first time in awhile Found innocent in a drawn out trial" For some reason that really draws me into the emotions running through the poem. Good work, hope to see lots more soon! |
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krazy 4 her Junior Member
since 2006-09-14
Posts 38Your parent's front porch |
I like this one as well. Very emotional. Good job. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I really liked this one by you Rhia. Amazing job! ~Alli~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i haven't read one of your poems for a while and reading it now i'm like wow i've missed so much that was absolutly amazing i loved it... i will definitly look for more of your poems now... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
"I know I never could, complete that thought or stare My fingers open, the knife falls, people would care I stand up tall for the first time in awhile Found innocent in a drawn out trial" This stanza of the poem drew me in. It relates so much to my own life. I was struck by it. Great job! |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
WoW. I realy don't know what to say. This poem was me. Amazing, absolutly incredible! |
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Seven.Shades.Of.Grey New Member
since 2008-01-24
Posts 1 |
I liked this alot, thank you |
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