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kissmexbaby6605
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since 2008-01-23

Posts 8
Georgia

0 posted 2008-01-23 06:50 AM

He pulls me close and I begin to feel my demise
His hands touch my face and soon reach my thighs
He doesn’t need to speak, I can see the words scattered across his face
My hand falls on his heart and I can feel it begin to race
The room goes silent and he is the only one I see
I only wish he could stay that is my final plea
I get lost in the moment as his hands caress my cheek
Within seconds I feel myself become weak
He kisses me so gently and whispers sweet nothings in my ear
He looks me in the eyes and sounds so sincere
He pulls my face towards his and I can feel our noses touch
His hand runs down and it’s my arm he starts to clutch
I fight back the tears as I count down the days in my head
He’s leaving soon and there’s so much unsaid
I want to go with him, yes I do
But what would I pursue
I cannot forget about myself and my dreams
Yet I can’t ignore my hearts screams
It begs for him to change, for him to be like the rest
For him to hurt me and rip my heart out of my chest
So I could have a reason to move on and I wouldn’t miss him so
It’s awful just his smile makes my heart glow
It’s going to tear me apart when he leaves I know
I’ll come and visit because he needs to go
It’s selfish to want him to stay
But I don’t want this feeling to go away
I find myself wanting to give him all of me
I don’t want to hide I want him to see
That I want to know how it’s going to be
In the future for him and me
Because his voice soothes my soul
& it’s hard for me to control
The feelings I have for him
I pray that this isn’t a whim
Because his touch brightens my world, it’s a beautiful sin
& I can’t bear to think of what could have been

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-01-23 01:45 PM

Kathryn, Welcome to Passion, I loved this poem it is so beautiful hope to read more soon
Krysti

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

2 posted 2008-01-23 06:24 PM

I love it! especially the last two lines and the part with wanting him to hurt you so you wont have to say goodbye... totally true! good job

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

3 posted 2008-01-23 06:33 PM

Great write. I love the detail and the form of the poem. Hope to read more soon.

[&] she's a blood broken rose

wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

4 posted 2008-01-23 11:35 PM

this is wonderful. i felt like this once and things happened. just make sure to make the right choice.

-jenna

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