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She Loved Him!!
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She Loved Him!! |
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thesongyoukeepsinging New Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 6Georgia, US |
She Loved Him! End of story. She couldn't hide it Couldn't deny it Everyone kew it They could see it When his name came up her eyes could light up an entire night sky She loved everything about him His smile, His smell His laugh, His touch His voice, His kiss It was everything she could ever have wanted He was the picture she saw when she awakened And the dream she dreamt when she slept He was every guy that she saw walk by He was every brush across her shoulders He was the only person in a room full of people He was the song in the breeze that whisked her away The one that she never stopped thinking about He was the one that she wanted for forever! She Misses Him End of Story. She can't hide it Can't deny it Everyone knows it They can see it She misses his name being brought up in conversation The beam of happyness she always felt with him She misses everything about him His smile, His smell His laugh, His touch His voice, His kiss She misses everything she ever had with him He's no longer the picture that she wakes to Or the dream that she sleeps to Now she sees every guy for who they really are... pain She feels every person bump into her on the streets And she loses her way in a big crowd of people The song that she used to hear has now lost its melody The wind just gives her a chill and her mind is full of wandering He was the one she wanted for forever Now she must move on with her life And find a new love and she really is not sure if it will ever really be the same... She Loved Him |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
This was good. Very chilling. Try explaining more how she lost him. I liked those two stanzas the way they were though but add for a middle. |
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