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Teen Poetry #8

I miss you

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

0 posted 2007-03-02 11:18 PM

Please come back to me
I miss you with all my heart.
I was stupid to let you go,
I should of held you from the start.

Its on these lonely nights
When I think of you the so much
I wish I han't been so stipid
I wish we could have kept in touch.

I sit here wondering
What we could have been
But I threw it all away
Before I knew what love could mean.

My heart is wounded horribly,
It still hurts, just like before
The only difference now is
You don't love me anymore.

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-03-02 11:49 PM

Wow I can relate to this one, I really liked this...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

*wishfull*thinking*
Junior Member

since 2006-09-03

Posts 33
north east of england

2 posted 2007-03-18 03:07 PM

i really really like this poem i can rela te to it tottally...

dani
x

I have been waiting all of my life
for you to come along and make everything alright, save me, just please save me

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2007-03-20 03:34 PM

This was good. I liked the ending. Really neat twist. Wow. I think one of your best but mostly for the best.

if anyone sees my poem about the dreams, anyone wanna crittique?

thesongyoukeepsinging
New Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 6
Georgia, US

4 posted 2007-03-23 09:25 AM

Great job!! i really liked that... totally relatable

~Life is not about how many breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away!!~

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