Teen Poetry #8 |
Gravity, molecules, tears and happiness |
shannonbaker Junior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 12 |
I write very free verse, I just let emotions go and write down whatever my mind says. Sometimes I just want everything to go away That I could be air Molecules of oxygen Something that doesn't think but merely functions Breathlessly working in unison with the world Maybe the universe. I wonder what it feels like to be gravity. Constantly pulling down. I would think it would get tired, and Maybe it could take a break And all of humanity could sit back And enjoy floating for a while Maybe gravity could pull our minds out So for a little while, we wouldn't have to think. Apathy isn't so bad, if you didn't know the difference. I suppose because I am human I would miss the luxury of feeling happy That is, if I was able And I would probably cry, if I could But my tears wouldn't leave me, There would be no gravity And they would float next to me Sprouting minds and faces And composing a conversation to make me feel better. I lost my mind though, I wouldn't care what they would say. If I could, I would probably hate them Or at least, envy their ability to think Form ideas and philosophies And fall in love. I guess I should be thankful for gravity. Molecules of air, and tears. My thoughts, And free will. Love, happiness, hate. Joy, fear, guilt Loneliness, confidence, depression Envy, gratitude, embarrassment Anxiety, hope, sympathy Pleasure, pride, excitemet Empathy, content, jealousy Peaceful, satisfied, calm happy happy happy |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cool write |
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shannonbaker Junior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 12 |
thank you :] |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Awesome idea that the tears will be floating alongside with names and faces.. Cool |
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