Stay strong, Stay positive.

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Teen Poetry #8

Stay strong, Stay positive.

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

0 posted 2007-03-15 03:24 PM

I hold my head high,
Today is a new day.
Stay strong, think positive,
That's always the way.

I just want to crumble,
Lay down and die.
But that's not allowed,
You must always try.

No daughter of her's,
Ever feels this way.
Noone in this family,
Has their own say.

The perfect smile,
The perfect posture.
All the while,
I'm starting to rupture.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2007-03-24 08:37 PM

you will get the chance to be your own person

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2007-03-24 10:32 PM

Lies.

Grab family values by the rectum and tell it want you want from it.

Impressive write on a commonly written-on subject. Normally I would hate something on this, just because of the cliche factor. But this... this was a refreshing angle and take on it.

I enjoyed this, very nice work.

Valedictions,

-Paul

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