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Consequences of Love |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Anyway.. I'm not sure if the mods will approve this.. But if they don't i would be happy for them to delete it.. This is a true story and its only unfolded in the last few weeks.. But i think its in a way going to help people realize the consequences of love aren't alway what we hope of them to be... Consequences Of Love... I take one step towards the open door I know you’re in there and I can’t take it any more She doesn’t deserve this and you know it too Do you know how many times she has been crying for you? And I Wonder If You Love Her You said it wasn’t your baby it just wasn’t possible She proved you wrong and you still told her it was impossible You couldn’t be a father you were to young But you could of kept it in your pants because she didn’t want to be a mum But you sat their and told her that you loved her no matter what She sat crying with me last night and I hugged her until she fell asleep She’s nine months pregnant now and all I ever see is her weep But you are off again with another of your crushes Sneaking behind the toilets giving teenage girls hot flushes And You Looked Her In The Eyes And Told Her That You Would Support Her! I awoke this morning and I thought it was a dream But little did I know it was blood that made me scream I found her in my kitchen backed against the door And there she lay dead on my kitchen floor And I knew It Was To Late…. But placed gently in the corner in a white fluffy towel Was a baby quietly sleeping and I asked my self how How could you have let it get to this? You knew she was Ill and you wouldn’t even give her a kiss I knew I had to talk to you… I take one more step towards the open door I know you’re in there and I can’t take anymore With a baby in my hands I give it a kick It comes flying open and you make me feel sick “While your in here sleeping around” “Your girlfriends lying dead on the ground” You cried. But it’s to late now… |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
This was really good , is it really true? Very emotional..Wow sad |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
Breath taking. Nothing more to say. Belinda.* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hi guys.. Thanx For Reply.. Unfortunately this one is very true... I will post a sequel very soon... |
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thesongyoukeepsinging New Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 6Georgia, US |
wow.... i cant believe that... guys are such pigs sometimes... im sorry that happened to you but you did a great job with it! ~Life is not about how many breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away!!~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow that was amazing Jessica... Is this a story about one of you're friends? Love from hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Sorry for the long delay in replies, This is about one of my friends.. A few friends and i have been looking after her baby with the help of her grandparents as her parents are holidaying in paris.. as far as they are concerned she is the one that got pregnant in the first place, mind you i will admit they did return home for her funeral and then returned back to paris to continue their holiday.. Her little baby "Phoebe" named after her mum is going to be cared for by his parents so hopefully this comes around real soon as i dont think ella likes the idea of being second best lol.. Anyway i apologise again for the delay and i will def.. get around to that sequal soon... Luv 2 all, Jess |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe poor ella hehe well she will get her wish soon enough. as for pheobe. it's good she has somewhere to go. it's all kinda sad... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Oh my GOSH :'( Sad, UGH them type of guys just get to me, KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS FORGOODNESS SAKE!! Poor baby  ( If you get to see her again soon, give her a kiss from me. lol....- Spirit x0x0 |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Extra props ) Nice work |
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