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there is a real code in here- extremly hard let'see who gets it
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there is a real code in here- extremly hard let'see who gets it |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
who can crack my coded message, once i get 20 posts i'll reveal what the code and message really was. have fun!  Soft, like a warm summer rain fall, it all starts Like a snow white sky in June’s intense heat They’re a terrible beauty of an ordeal to see hearts One or two might come and one or two will fleet It’s like a well worded poem or a perfect painting A heart that remains, even if it still bears the stitches A funny thing that leaves you dizzy near fainting The one that turns the wanting women from witches There are no adequate words for sensations that I feel When touched by feelings within myself I do not comprehend Hardly more than a mind and soul, a voice long still I know a few things, and try to let all I know be able to bend An image of words in a wandering wayfaring mind Like a painting of politics of the most boorish sorts They become incomplete and different from what we find As if a ship were to land in the most foreign of ports Hidden codes in words you see don’t make sense Not in the least, not a hint for the foolish do I give out They both gather at the center of what I think in a fence Unable to riddle my riddle you are somewhat lost about Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness. -Sir Gawain |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
so i've decied i'll never get 20 posts, haven't ever got more that 6, so i'm uping it to 13 this one included. so 12. bye! Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhhh 11 more come on y'all we can do it hehe I really am awful with codes tho. yah so i'll just wait for the answer hehe... hunnie;0 ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
codes like what? like patterns or..?? |
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fanatic-flyer Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 26Bournemouth |
i dont know, help meeeee... can i have a clue? Thanks for everything, because everything makes the world happy =) |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
They’re a terrible beauty of an ordeal to see hearts what? I don't get it |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Hardly more than a mind and soul, a voice long still I know a few things, and try to let all I know be able to bend those don't make sense and the rhying is really forced |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
hey both gather at the center of what I think in a fence Unable to riddle my riddle you are somewhat lost about Confused about the first line and the second I kinda get |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Well you have somewhat of a pattern in your ending words to each line: STST GSGS LDLD DSDS ETET However, I fail to see any significance in that (actually that might have happened just because of your rhyming). Now you said: “Hidden codes in words you see don’t make sense” well if that’s the case then what’s the point? Lol I mean if the code doesn’t make sense then, what’s the deal? Is it a riddle or a pattern of letters within the words? The first stanza suggests that you are referring to “tears”. Then the second stanza refers to “love.” The remaining stanzas seem to dwindle and tend not to make much sense, lol sorry. The line: “They both gather at the center of what I think in a fence” could be a major clue but your wording doesn’t make any sense. I’m usually very good with codes and riddles but this one eludes me and think that is the point. (I wonder, if there’s a code in there at all lol) Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
hahaha you are all so funny. i'll give a hint, just listen to the line that talks about the center of a fence. Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness. |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Neighbors or dogs... Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
No, birds... it's birds. Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
ONE MORE CLUE- A HINT AT THE CENTER Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness. |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Still doesn't make sense. Sorry. But at least it's at 13 posts, so now we can know what the heck you're talking about, lol. Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
something about the mind |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ahhh I wasn't even close some good ideas from you all... oh no Whitt don't back out on us now, ahhh so close... hunnie |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
just wait a minuet i won't i'm dieing to see what you guys say it's so funny. and i'm getting the answer all ready it's hard work explaining it and life gets in the way- i have papers due out my ears so i'll put it in as soon as i can, you guys won't believe the answer though. lol have fun! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
well hurryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy hehe |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
oh bigosh TELL US! |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
"They both gather at the center of what I think in a fence" Well first of all U say they BOTH which implies 2x of sumthin of wat i think IN a fence idk im still confuzzled and prob on the complete wrong track but then again maybe sumthin has 2 do wit the strange wording well im lost and GL 2 u all |
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River Of Tears Junior Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 25Canada! |
I am lost. yup. I am, but its not very hard to conufse me. I am waiting on the awnser now.....  I am me, And always will be, If you think you can change me, Take a better look cause, I am happy as me! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
hurrrry |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
I know everyone's pretty much saying the same thing, but PLEASE HURRY! This poem is driving me up the wall, I think about it during random parts of the day and... it's... getting... to... me... : ) hurry! Those who dance are considered insane by those who cannot hear the music. |
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hollygal Junior Member
since 2006-12-30
Posts 21Alberta, Canada |
It's over 20 posts!! Please tell us the answer!!!!! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
There is no code. And if there is, it's not a logical one or one that can be deciphered. Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I think she quit on us she prob. said haha i am leaving the site so they will never know ahhhhhh |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
noooooooooooo i wanna no |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I kind of agree that there is no code? And, if, and that's an extreme "IF" there is, it's nothing we can decipher, it is personal? But you do notice it got the desired reaction for the title, you all took the time to post and read "The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away" |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
strait up, i agree with that dude..or dude-et, im not sure which. |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
I give up wonderin if there is even a code My mind is like lightning |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I was thinking "Hmmm, there must be some sort of code", but now that I see this post is two months old I am doubting it. Probably the original poster wanted attention to see how many replies they could get.  |
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