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nevermore93
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since 2007-10-24
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0 posted 2007-11-16 11:50 PM


The machines have overrun us
We built them as our slaves
yet now they come with revenge
and we shall fall to their ways

We thought that we had total control
but now we are under their power
The fools that made our own masters
now at the brink of extinction this hour

How could we have been so damn foolish
to not see that our greatest threat
was being assembled piece by piece
by the hands now serving these atrocities

I ponder to myself as i look at the sky
why did we not rely on the earth
It could have provided us with all our needs
but now we are down to the ground, on our knees.

© Copyright 2007 Elias L. - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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1 posted 2007-11-17 08:48 AM


this reminds me strongly of the matrix. very cool, very true.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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