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Depression |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
I have been sitting here on the floor with tears strolling down my face Wishing right now I could be painless in another place But now the river of tears are gone leaving only a drought. Contemplating many negative thoughts I could somehow bring about What about consumption without a trace. What about a string of permanent pearls around my neck I can get away with it, who cares? My heart is black I am a wreck! But oh wait! What if it goes wrong and I keep living on! But now with a disability check. A precise slice might be it Although blood makes me sick, And what an awful sight to see skin split! Maybe a leap from a high place, NO-NO I want to be buried with my face. A puncture on my temple or a tunnel from my mouth to the back of my head, But this would cause a big mess all over from the blood that would be spread. Instead a deep swim into the lonely see with waves that grow big Nope! I can’t! I forgot I have always been claustrophobic Inside my room with the door closed My negative thoughts now have decomposed On the floor With my eyes swollen and sore My eyelids begin to get heavy and sleep calls to me to get ready This is how my days are when my mind is a little unsteady I knew this girl who didn't want to die only bring on a little attention. but when she realized it, it was to late for redemption. she did not die right away but she stayed for three years in a vegetated state. she is gone now, and her parents now carry the weight, of their daughter who died of the age of eight. |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
That was amazing! It described so well wat a young suicidal teenager feels {comming frim experience} I am so sorry you have to deal with this. Gr8 Write Adreanna Leigh Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awwe this was so sad but so nicely written I loved this  Krysti |
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