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Shake
Junior Member

since 2006-11-17

Posts 40

0 posted 2007-11-12 11:59 AM

This poem is for my girl, Jennifer. I love her sooo much!

If I should die before I wake,
I pray that Angels keep you safe.
And if I should wake before I die,
I pray that you don't see me cry.
If my soul burns and yours soars,
I pray you get through Heaven's doors.
And if you reach those golden gates,
I pray the Lord your soul to take.
If you should die before I did,
I'd die on the spot to see you again,
And I hope our souls are tied together.
I pray you stay with me forever!

~Dedicated to Jennifer

Feedback is appreciated!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-11-12 12:30 PM

it's very sweet...I'm sorry I don't have much more feedback than that.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-11-12 08:22 PM

This was very touching

I enjoyed reading very much! And i hope to see more soon.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-12 10:23 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-11-14 12:45 PM

awe this was the sweetest poem. Jennifer is a really lucky gurlie

oh and it was very well written flow was flawless

Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-11-15 08:53 AM

wow. you need no advice. it was perfect.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

6 posted 2007-11-15 11:39 AM

this was absoulutely amazing. I wish i could wrie 1/2 this good. good job :]

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

7 posted 2007-11-15 01:37 PM

jenifer is a lucky girl!

Shake
Junior Member

since 2006-11-17

Posts 40

8 posted 2007-11-17 10:27 AM

Thanks so much yall!

Gods and Demons,
Keys, Lyrics, and Vocals
~Shake

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