Falling for a friend (Title sucks, poem's better)

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nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23

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NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-09-12 12:04 PM

Friends since we were infants
We've held each other close
You've cried only to me
Told secrets no one knows

Everyone already thinks
We're a couple in disguise
Even though it's not the truth
Hope lurks behind my eyes

Sure we joked about it before
Got 'married' when we were five
But my friendhship has turned to something more
After all, you keep me alive

Fifteen years we've walked together
Down the confusing path of this world
And everybody already knows
I'll always be your girl

Fondly I look back on
The one girl that tried to pull you away
You came back to me that night
A handprint across your face

She thought that she could break us
And tear our friendship apart
But the stupid bimbo couldn't see
I'd always be in your heart

So maybe it's time to take that step
And let you hear this cry
Because sometihng inside me knows
This passion will never die

~~~Yet another poem to Byron. He seems an inspiration in all my poetry...~~~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2006-09-12 01:25 PM

You created a very heartfelt poem about the greatest kind of love, the love of a friend. The best matched couples of all were at first friends.

pip_man
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since 2006-07-15

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2 posted 2006-09-12 02:57 PM

I really enjoyed reading this poem, and it def has a lot of emotion in it, which are the kind of peoms i like to read. I can relate to the sitiuation of a best friend feeling like more than just a friend...great write!

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

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3 posted 2006-09-14 01:37 AM

wow did you let him read it that was a great poem... i hope everything works out for the best... and i hope going into something deeper doesn't change things 'tween you too... he seems like a really good friend... but you have my good luck and godspeed

luc from hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

deceitful_siren
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since 2006-09-14

Posts 20
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4 posted 2006-09-14 09:39 AM

Ha, I knew you liked Byron. (Bugs her for the rest of her life) But- despite the fact your lover is a lozer- this is really good. GREAT JOB SIS!!

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

5 posted 2006-09-14 06:11 PM

Beautiful poem! This boy sounds really great from all the poetry you have written about him. You should tell him how you feel, good luck!

~Alli~

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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6 posted 2007-07-21 10:08 PM

beautiful. that's all i can say. beautiful.

-Red

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

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7 posted 2007-07-21 11:53 PM

Wow...that was, wow. I loved it so much

And i am with hunnie. You should let him read it. He seems like a wonderful guy; best of wishes

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

sexykitten15
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since 2007-07-22

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8 posted 2007-07-22 02:42 AM

That is a GORGEOUS poem..
and it can relate to ALOT of ppl
i really like it.
awesome write!

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05

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9 posted 2007-07-22 01:24 PM

wow..
this was so good...
It does seem very hard to tell someone the truth about something especially when its someone you care about that much....
great poem!

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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

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10 posted 2007-07-22 08:37 PM

great poem i liked it alot and i wish you the best and do what your heart says to because the mind sometimes messes everything up and you just have to follow your heart (but that doesn't mean never listen to your mind lol)

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09

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11 posted 2007-07-23 03:49 PM

This is a really strong poem and a very good one. The emotion is strong and it all fits together the rythmn. I think you should just follow your heart

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

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12 posted 2007-07-23 07:26 PM

ahhh if only you knew home much we miss you nostalgic*pride... you have'r=t been here for so long.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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