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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-07-19 05:44 PM

can you hear the angels cry?
there voices crumble as they die.
then they fall with burning wings,
and the whole way down you hear them scream.

there wingbeats sound,
as they fall down.
they land with a sickning crunch.
they lay there crestfallen, unable to move.
because moving hurts too much.

then the pain sets in and begins to creep,
the wounds just left open to bleed.
as the anger begins to seep.

it seeps down so fast,
to the point of anger and hate.
the horns are starting to show,
as the holo's being replaced.

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (07-20-2007 12:32 AM).]

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-07-19 07:15 PM

i liked it, it interested me. it's always a shame though, when something so good goes so bad. it reminds me of the bibical tales of lucifer and his angels being thrown down from the heavens to darkness and hell. it was well written.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

StormyB
Junior Member

since 2007-07-18

Posts 42
Ohio Usa

2 posted 2007-07-19 10:10 PM

very well written. I do love a poem you can feel as you read.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-07-19 10:15 PM

Another wonderful poem...why do some people just get all the talent? lol, nice job

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

4 posted 2007-07-19 10:29 PM

Wow, this is incredible... Just amazing. Dark and twisty, but that's a good thing.

I'm the literary equivalent of a Big Mac and Fries.
- Stephen King

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2007-07-19 11:23 PM

oh wow i liked the first and last paragraphs the best where they are falling and then when they are the demons emerging

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-07-19 11:51 PM

ahh not one of my fav from you but still good...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

7 posted 2007-07-23 12:08 PM

OMG i love it your so good at writing
Signed
Meggy

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