Teen Poetry #8 |
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Stronger |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain ![]() |
to be completely honest the thought of you still hurts but slowly, day by day, your name doesnt mean as much and your eyes are still the bluest you smile is still the brightest and i am not moving on but the pain is making me strong if you told me you still cared i can't say i would turn you down because i know you did me wrong but you're missed around this town and your hands will still fit mine perfectly and i can still imagine you loving me and i am not moving on but the ache is making me strong and i cant say i would be honest but they all know how i feel and i can tell you i'd want to lie because i know my hopes are so surreal and boy you still tear me apart because i've given you all of my heart and i'm not moving on anytime soon, thats for sure but i believe i'll be coming out of it so much stronger ~missy |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
This is amazing!! And don't worry, your not alone in feeling that way about someone. I love it, wonderful write and expression of feelings ![]() So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thank you so much britney!:] |
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sexykitten15 Junior Member
since 2007-07-22
Posts 34 |
I think in certain parts it didnt make sense.. but other than that i think that it is excellent! Like i can relate to that so well! u really know how to touch someone! |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
This was really good... I can relate to it a little to well.... ![]() One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thanks kitten an jezz.. I'm sorry y'all can both relate.. ![]() thanks so much for the replies.. ![]() |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
i liked this it can be related to so easily i know i have seen it happen many a time and the poem just worked great job |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thank you soo much painter! ![]() |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah this was so true I can relate so much but I am sure anyone our age can... hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
ha i know forreal hunnie ![]() thanks for the reply, ttyl. ~missy |
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