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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2007-07-21 11:21 PM

to be completely honest
the thought of you still hurts
but slowly, day by day, your
name doesnt mean as much
and your eyes are still the bluest
you smile is still the brightest
and i am not moving on
but the pain is making me strong

if you told me you still cared
i can't say i would turn you down
because i know you did me wrong
but you're missed around this town
and your hands will still fit mine perfectly
and i can still imagine you loving me
and i am not moving on
but the ache is making me strong

and i cant say i would be honest
but they all know how i feel
and i can tell you i'd want to lie
because i know my hopes are so surreal
and boy you still tear me apart
because i've given you all of my heart
and i'm not moving on anytime soon, thats for sure
but i believe i'll be coming out of it so much stronger

~missy
<font size=1 color=pink style=verdana>afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-21 11:58 PM

This is amazing!! And don't worry, your not alone in feeling that way about someone. I love it, wonderful write and expression of feelings

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2007-07-22 02:04 AM

thank you so much britney!:]

sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

3 posted 2007-07-22 02:39 AM

I think in certain parts it didnt make sense.. but other than that i think that it is excellent!

Like i can relate to that so well!
u really know how to touch someone!

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

4 posted 2007-07-22 01:25 PM

This was really good...
I can relate to it a little to well....

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

5 posted 2007-07-22 01:59 PM

thanks kitten an jezz.. I'm sorry y'all can both relate..

but it'll be aiight i promise:]]

thanks so much for the replies..

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

6 posted 2007-07-22 08:27 PM

i liked this it can be related to so easily i know i have seen it happen many a time and the poem just worked great job

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

7 posted 2007-07-22 09:38 PM

thank you soo much painter!

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2007-07-23 07:08 PM

woah this was so true I can relate so much but I am sure anyone our age can...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

9 posted 2007-07-23 10:00 PM

ha i know forreal hunnie

thanks for the reply, ttyl.

~missy
<font size=1 color=pink style=verdana>afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

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