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pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

0 posted 2006-12-23 11:38 AM

I sit alone tonight.
I am numb and full of pain.
I think of only you,
Are your feelings the same?

I long for someone to touch
Someone I can hold dear.
You are just that someone.
I swear to be sincere.

I no my past is haunting.
It scares you with its hate.
But I vow to love now,
Will you try to stop this fate?

This poem is a cry to you.
I want you to be mine.
I want to call you baby,
Will you stick with me this time?

Well, its been a while since I have posted, and I don't know if this is much of a come back poem, but let me know what you think.

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2006-12-26 05:09 PM

I Liked... It... It is a different style in which i write but i got an enjoyment from reading it.. Nice to see you back....

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2006-12-26 05:10 PM

I Liked... It... It is a different style in which i write but i got an enjoyment from reading it.. Nice to see you back....

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2006-12-27 04:13 PM

Nice comeback. Nice to see you back. So many new people its confusing. Not a bad thing to have so many new people, just confusing to whose who and everything. WElcome to everyone though.

but

'no' shouldnt it be know

[This message has been edited by rhia_5779 (12-28-2006 01:31 PM).]

*Swing_Life_Away*
Junior Member

since 2006-12-22

Posts 10
UK

4 posted 2006-12-27 04:19 PM

wow, thas really good, and i love poems with rhymes, even if im crap at it myself! fabbeh!

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

5 posted 2006-12-27 04:21 PM

adding to library

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2006-12-30 04:09 AM

This poem is a cry to you.
I want you to be mine.
I want to call you baby,
Will you stick with me this time?~

you always manage to get me to reply to your poems, i love them. it's really good to see you up and posting again

hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

7 posted 2006-12-31 12:22 PM

I really enjoyed this... by your pic.. I can say that normally.. you don't look like someone who would write poetry..but around here.. not many guys do and the ones that do don't share it ..

so good job..

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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