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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2006-12-30 12:34 PM

You headline disappointment,
but I listen anyways,
attracted to the light in your eyes,
I willingly give my heart away.

"don't get attatched" I tell myself,
cause you leave every single time,
forcing me to come back to my pen and paper,
and talk in heartbreaking rhymes.

I hate the way you give me names
that are cute in our own little way,
I hate the way you play such games,
yet I fall for them anyways.

I hate how you can draw me back in love,
and then drop your love for me,
I hate the way you know just what to say
and the way you know just what I need.

I hate the way you know i'll come back,
the way you only want me when I'm gone,
I hate the way you make me cry,
but make me feel like I'm the one who's wrong.

I'm drawn to your words and your laugh,
drawn to the way you make me smile,
The way I go back is such a crime,
I put my heart on trial.

"don't get attatched" is so easy to say,
yet so hard to follow through,
I could walk away from almost every guy,
if only that guy wasn't you.

-Erin

AIM-beatufu1tragidy

Tell me what you think about being open, about being honest with yourself.

chiLanta
Junior Member

since 2006-12-01

Posts 47

1 posted 2006-12-30 06:53 PM

THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM, i can feel where you are comming from. this was really touching...

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

2 posted 2006-12-30 07:53 PM

I am glad to see another poem by you, I thought it was very good, but I especially likes the last stanza. Hope to see more soon. Nice write!

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

Tee
Junior Member

since 2006-12-20

Posts 26
Belgium

3 posted 2006-12-30 08:31 PM

Realy like this one, especialy the ending is extremely strong.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-12-31 12:15 PM

Hey erin.. it's been a while.. I love this.. you are my favorite writer on this site.. I love your poems.. this was really good.. I love the part that says how he only wants you when you're gone... beautiful.. heartfelt.. much love.

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

5 posted 2006-12-31 12:35 PM

hey i liked this a lot i liked the whole poem great job on this i can totally relate too

damo451
Junior Member

since 2006-12-29

Posts 18
Western Australia

6 posted 2006-12-31 12:39 PM

A beautiful poem. It's so hard trying not to get attached to someone when you really want to be. And if someone doesn't want to be attached, they just make you try harder.

~Poetry occurs when the heart, mind and soul combine to produce sweet words, which in turn, heal the hearts, minds and souls of others~

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