Teen Poetry #8 |
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Don't Get Attatched |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world ![]() |
You headline disappointment, but I listen anyways, attracted to the light in your eyes, I willingly give my heart away. "don't get attatched" I tell myself, cause you leave every single time, forcing me to come back to my pen and paper, and talk in heartbreaking rhymes. I hate the way you give me names that are cute in our own little way, I hate the way you play such games, yet I fall for them anyways. I hate how you can draw me back in love, and then drop your love for me, I hate the way you know just what to say and the way you know just what I need. I hate the way you know i'll come back, the way you only want me when I'm gone, I hate the way you make me cry, but make me feel like I'm the one who's wrong. I'm drawn to your words and your laugh, drawn to the way you make me smile, The way I go back is such a crime, I put my heart on trial. "don't get attatched" is so easy to say, yet so hard to follow through, I could walk away from almost every guy, if only that guy wasn't you. -Erin AIM-beatufu1tragidy |
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chiLanta Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47 |
THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM, i can feel where you are comming from. this was really touching... |
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pip_man Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 70Canada |
I am glad to see another poem by you, I thought it was very good, but I especially likes the last stanza. Hope to see more soon. Nice write! "When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." |
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Tee Junior Member
since 2006-12-20
Posts 26Belgium |
Realy like this one, especialy the ending is extremely strong. |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
Hey erin.. it's been a while.. I love this.. you are my favorite writer on this site.. I love your poems.. this was really good.. I love the part that says how he only wants you when you're gone... beautiful.. heartfelt.. much love. ~Heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
hey i liked this a lot i liked the whole poem great job on this i can totally relate too |
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damo451 Junior Member
since 2006-12-29
Posts 18Western Australia |
A beautiful poem. It's so hard trying not to get attached to someone when you really want to be. And if someone doesn't want to be attached, they just make you try harder. ~Poetry occurs when the heart, mind and soul combine to produce sweet words, which in turn, heal the hearts, minds and souls of others~ |
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