Teen Poetry #8 |
running from |
forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
your fleeing from some one, will this ever be done? can you stop for a minute slow down, just hold on. where will you get from running without quit, you dont know where your going, you wont admit. first of all, what began this casscading wall? what was it that pushed you, shoved, made you fall? you cant even say what pushed you astray, it tugged at your heart, and you fled, ran away. no one knows what why this terror arose, but i think the answers here, right under your nose. if nobobody can tell why you suddenly fell maybe the one your running from is, you, yourself. then where can you run to possibly escape from what can never leave, or stop that monotanus hum? ~me ...ok, seriously just wrote this...totally random...so ya, just, w/ever |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I actually loved this.. It was wonderful.. It had a great meaning to it and the ending was great.. keep up the good work and enjoy Piptalk ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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