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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is 
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blindly running to hide from whats bright even if it means doing what isn't right i find false happiness where the lost confide and i find in the shadows my only dim light wishing for a life without confusion and lies but to get there you wont even find me try hoping for more from this washed out heart i cant even pull my own two feet apart to walk i've discovered in the most unpleasent way that you have to let go of the ground on which you stay even though it may hurt at the commencement you find happiness not just contentment ~me ...ok, ek. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Its scary i can relate to all of this. It is so true. I liked the solidness of the thought and the flow and fluidness |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
to walk i've discovered in the most unpleasent way that you have to let go of the ground on which you stay even though it may hurt at the commencement you find happiness not just contentment This was my favorite part.. Happiness is one of the most important things in life to me becuase you can have love and you can have trust and honesty but they don't always promise you happiness but if you are happy you already have everything you want and need.... You are very talented with your words.. we seem to kind of think alike in some ways.. Keep it up.. Heather ps-going in my library!@#$ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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