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Teen Poetry #8

I don't understand

nostalgic*pride
Member

since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-09-11 03:06 PM

What did I ever do to you
What have I ever put you through
Why can I do nothing right
Why do we always fight
When will this stupidity end
When will we make amends

I don't understand
Why you act this way
And I can't can't comprehend
What I'm supposed to say
To the endless circle of lies
That you placed around my life
I don't understand

Who would you like me to be
Who are you to place judgement on me
Where am I supposed to go
Where will I find a home
How did we get to this place
How can I rise again to grace

I don't understand
Why you don't love me anymore
And I can't comprehend
What I'm suffering for
A mother who'll never acctept me
And just let me be
I don't understand

But... neither do you, huh?

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-09-11 09:22 PM

This had a lot of emotions in it. I like how you really didn't know what you were talking about til the end. great job.

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-09-12 12:14 PM

right now currently you are my favorite poet on this site too... i love how all your poems have an awesome flow to them and have a lot of emotion too... can't wait to read the other ones

...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

3 posted 2006-09-12 03:20 PM

I thought this was another amazing poem by you, and again there was a lot of emotion in it...Great write, hope to see more!

"Knowledge speaks, but wisdon listens."
Jimi Hendrix

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