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loveislove
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since 2006-06-25

Posts 59
USA

0 posted 2006-09-07 08:47 PM

I dont know why I said that things I said
But I was just thinking about how you were writing yet another poem

And then I remembered your other poem
Then I started laughing because...

It was dead silent in here
And that poem remembered me
okay this poem is slightly odd, but originally it wasnt a poem, it was just a paragraph that i wrote on a piece of paper when i was laughing because my friend was writing a poem in study hall and the first line said "In the dead silence I can hear you breath" and then i started laughing hysterically and I said "that poem remembers me!" cuz i got really confused while trying to talk, so i just started writing that so that i could tell my friend what i meant to say, then it just sounded slightly like a poem so thats what it is now.

then theres the moment of silence, the eye of the storm, when the whole world collapses, i want to be in your arms

stargal
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since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-09-08 08:57 AM

This is slightly odd but I kind of like it because it IS odd, no offence... I'm not really sure what to say about it; it's different but interesting to read.

Thanks for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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loveislove
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 59
USA

2 posted 2006-09-10 03:22 PM

yeah it is pretty weird but i love it...thanks!

then theres the moment of silence, the eye of the storm, when the whole world collapses, i want to be in your arms

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2006-09-10 11:36 PM

Interesting write, I must say, but sounds like fun in study hall, lol.

~Alli~

loveislove
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since 2006-06-25

Posts 59
USA

4 posted 2006-09-11 07:32 PM

yeah you wouldnt think study hall is that much fun, but with my friend and i death row could be fun

then theres the moment of silence, the eye of the storm, when the whole world collapses, i want to be in your arms

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-09-12 12:52 PM

haha funny

:P
hunnie*

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