Teen Poetry #8 |
The Dove Of Faith |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
First Off.. This Poem just came from nowhere i just started writing and couldnt stop.. Inturept it the way you think u should, thats if it is inturpretable at all... The Dove Of Faith It’s too hard to say you’re hurting And it’s too complicated to surrender So many times your fears get the better of you And your wounds weep and are tender It’s not easy to be the one everyone expects, If you try to fulfil everything, it all ends up a mess It didn’t matter who we looked like or how much we weighed We were led to believe what was on the inside was all that mattered But it was all another ploy and one of life’s many serenades Never trust the one you think knows you the most You will never be good enough they will just judge you and boast Angry faces will always be judged No matter your size, shape or how well you can be budged Only place trust in the ones you love Let your faith fly across the ocean on the back of a dove Here it will be safe for many years to come On the back of that dove your faith will remain a secret to all but some. |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
wow i know were u are coming from with this one (hmmmm how did i know??) and this put it all sooo clearly for me to see. thanks for this read. it was really nifty. |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
thanks for showing me how i feel in words that make sense. -Lovely |
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