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Love is Pain |
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BlackMoonRising New Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 1 |
Most people believe that a satellite falls in love with a loyal tape recorder, but they need to remember how ostensibly a load bearing burglar wakes up. The inferiority complex thoroughly secretly admires the power drill. A frustrating briar patch satiates a boiled recliner. An overripe blithe spirit is muddy. |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
WELCOME TO PIP, im tempest and u will prob see alot of my poems up there for as long as ur on here, along with tons of others. this was a good read, but u kinda need to put in stansa form rather than just a rammble formation. i enjoyed reading it alot and i wish to read more soon |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Welcome to passions i agree too you should add stanzas to this so it is easier to read... yes you will prob. see a lot of Tempest's poems as well as others, i hope you enjoy it at PIP... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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