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Teen Poetry #8

The Fabric Of Reality

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-10-29 09:40 PM

siting in a delicate facade of lies,
a perfect dream is born.
forever the vendetta holds,
and consistintly i am torn.

this web of unlawful lies is spun
i dont know where to begin.
forsaken and forlorn in fears,
the insomnia sets in.

bleeding dry the masquerade,
it hurts to even breath.
i am instintaneously drawn,
to the invisioned version of me.

testing the possible limits
of everything ive ever seen
i know that im only a stitch
of the fabric of reality

This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered

jarrett
Member

since 2006-05-10

Posts 72
Ut, USA

1 posted 2006-10-29 10:06 PM

WOW I loved this poem, it's excellent Very well done I love these prhases!
bleeding dry the masquerade,
it hurts to even breath.
i am instintaneously drawn,
to the invisioned version of me.

testing the possible limits
of everything ive ever seen
i know that im only a stitch
of the fabric of reality

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2006-10-31 12:13 PM

My lil Mate does it again, U always make me believe in wat u write.. I tell ya ur an awesome poet. Good Work Hun xxoox

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-12-02 12:11 PM

Wow!! that's about all I can say.. you really did a great job with this one.. you never cease to amaze me.. loved it.. so i'm "bumping" it back up to the top... much love ~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-12-02 12:39 PM

last stanza was amazing i really liked it...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

5 posted 2006-12-02 10:42 AM

Gotta add to library

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