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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
I sit on my porch waiting for you, waiting until you come,waiting for you to get home. I stay up late in a room filled with darkness, Darkness filling every corner, nothing beside me just me,me alone. I cry myself to sleep knowing your not there, I'M THOUGH WAITING, WAITING FOR YOU TO COME WAITING FOR YOU TO GET HOME. I'M DONE! [This message has been edited by wwzwlmd8 (11-28-2006 06:05 PM).] |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
nice,short, but nice. i liked it alot. and i think u ment through, not thought in the last bit. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
wuts with the Im done? |
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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
The I'm done means im thrw waiting around for him. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
~Darkness filling every corner, nothing beside me just me,me alone.~ this not only is my favorite part i also think it is the strongest, depthwise(that should be a word ever thoung it isn't) hope to read more soon... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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