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Teen Poetry #8

why isnt someone there?

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-11-22 09:38 PM

Its like I cant say anything
For my words will be repeated
The things I say will be taken for what there not
And my friendships will be deleted

Im normally not so stressed
Normally never a care
Its not about me
Cause for someone else
I'll always be there

Its like I cant say anything
Its just like no one cares
I cant have one more person say "shut up!"
Why isn't someone there?

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2006-11-22 11:30 PM

wow...really good rhyming, it doesn't sound forced...i really struggle with that...the rhythym is good too...nice = )

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2006-11-23 05:04 AM

I always found keeping a journal was best. Everyone is not as understanding as you might hope they would be. Friends have to be of long standing before you confide in them. A journal keeps your thought safe and is something you have always available to be read thought about again. just an idea. martyjo

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-11-23 11:57 PM

Its like I cant say anything
Its just like no one cares
I cant have one more person say "shut up!"
Why isn't someone there?

i loved the ending Why isn't someone there, often i've felt like that, but someone is there. Our heavenly father is always there not waiting and watching for us to mess up but to see what we can acheive. Confide in him always and you will have one of the greatest friends

hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

4 posted 2006-11-24 11:23 PM

this was a good write

EmilySian
Junior Member

since 2007-08-19

Posts 21
England

5 posted 2007-08-19 01:37 PM

I like this a lot, and I can connect with what your saying! Good poem!

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