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Teen Poetry #8

my hands

yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27

Posts 52
california

0 posted 2006-11-22 12:01 PM

here i stand
staring at my hands
can i blame them
for it was not me
who caused these cuts
but these hands of mine
its like they have a mind of there own
some times my brain says stop
but these hands continue on
some times i wonder if i have any control over them at all
its like there rebeling against me
some times i can stop them for getting out of control
but only some times
maybe its not me hands at all
maybe just maybe its those little voices i hear that say
your nothing
your nobody
you never make it any where so just give up
you know those voices that get stuck in your head from all the people that doubt you
and maybe thats why my hands dont listen to me
cuz all this isnt me.

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2006-11-22 11:28 PM

i realllllly like that idea...that your hands are doing what you feel like you cant control...kool...

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