Teen Poetry #8 |
MY PRiNCE iS FORBiDDEN |
buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
i feel so awful inside knowing im commiting a sin i don't know how to change it cause every time we meet it starts again. every time you smile at me i never want to be free of your stare i just want to be together and continue to feel this flare. i know you love me and i know you won't admit it its a little hard to do when doing so is breaking your current commitment. i know i shouldn't love you i shouldn't lead you on i should let you think i really don't care and my heart has finally withdrawn. i wish you would push me away like you always do yet every time i slightly move on you say something to make me think wishes come true. why can't you realize you are hurting me? and hurting someone else some other place? a girl's heart is fragil babe.. this is a fact you should embrace. sitting here alone a sigh and a tear escape me its kinda funny though when only one person knows what is so obviously supposed to be. why don't you realize we were meant to be, honestly and truly together, together forever? just open your eyes and see!for me? oh i know this must be real now, this couldn't only be just in fairy tales, its not just written! the one person that should be your prince is the one who's taken, and a love is forbidden. ~missy My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away.. my love is a waste of time if you never stay |
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nick_lyss Member
since 2006-08-21
Posts 88 |
hi this is a really good poem.i really loved it |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thank you so much courtney! ~missy |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
It really bothers me that you didn't capitalize your I's, but once I looked past that good write. -Ash- |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
haha, sorry, i was in a...how do i say it.."super girly" mood. sorry bout that! and thanks=] |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i like this poem and it is a tiny bit girly but it's so sweet "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
yeahhh i get in those "girly" moods sometimes..lol |
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