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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i loved you with all my heart from the very start the pain it lasts forever somehow its not getting better you said they were all better than me can that really be? you knew how to break my heart you perfected it like an art somehow the words i miss you dont really cut it but now ive gone and dont it your getting ready to walk away theres nothing i can say i knew you desereved someone better thats why i let you go your sadness crushes my heart your tears shatter my soul youll never never know how much this hurts but its better this way for im nothing more than dirt |
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TrueDesire12 Junior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 11England |
hey you shuldnt say that about yourself. your the one who desvers somebetter! still a lovely poem! TrueDesire xx |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Jenna, this was such an emotional poem I think everyone has been threw this at least one time...Keep writing  Krysti |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
i may not know you but you should not let a guy think that youre no good!i loved your poem~!?!~ |
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