Teen Poetry #8 |
For my future (redone) |
freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I think its still kinda crappy, but i gave it some more thought and redid it and added some more stuff, so i hope it came out okay. Just be truthful and tell me that it's crappy, if it really is. Who are you What is it that you see I see the future Where this isn't meant to be I take steps back Slowly breath But for my future That's what I'm in need Why can't I regret this A false nature of me Pertend you don't exist So I can live in reality Who are you To stop me where I am Tell me this is as far as I go When you don't understand It's not about you Tho you make it to be about us It's about my future And in it, I don't want this lust Why can't you let go Forget this simple love I rather be alone Cuz I've had enough My future is all I see I want the happy not the sad Let me live in reality For my future Don't let me regret the past I love pancakes!!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WONDERFUL!!! awesome job really truly this is excellent! |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
AWESOMELY AMAZING~!?!~ |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
WHOA! this was like the situation I'm in right now in my life. This was just really mind blowing. lol. -Zach So together but so broken inside |
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