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my heart smiles
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my heart smiles |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
talk to me, i need to hear your voice let it cradle me and keep me warm tonight theres a song i know, about a girl in love if i sang to you would you know its from my heart theres just something about you driving me wild everytime i look in your eyes my heart smiles when your gone, i close my eyes i hear you laugh and know i'll be alright do you notice me, when i admire you your beauty holds my eyes and my body can't move theres just something about you driving me wild everytime i look in your eyes my heart smiles will you come with me, and let me take your hand are you ready to learn a new dance your everything, i wish i could be but having you here by my side is all i need theres just something about you driving me wild everytime i look in your eyes my heart smiles memento mori |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Great poem. I think this poem has possibilities to become a song. Cause it sure sounded like it to me!  Great work! -Zach I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
funny how you say that, it is a song! most of the stuff i post on here are lyrics to my songs. thanx for the reply. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Wow love your lyrics, so much better than mine, lol I love pancakes!!! |
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