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Wasted Time
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Wasted Time |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Wasted Time All that’s left to do Is sit down on my own No strength left for you It’s me now, all alone I just don’t have the will To get up and try to fight Time is all that’s left to kill Don’t tell me it’ll be alright Because I’ve come to a dead end There’s nothing left for me Too many mistakes to mend So many you just don’t see I just want to lie down To sleep this life away This life in which I drown I’ve got nothing left to pay A spare part in this system I don’t have a use anymore This life I do condemn What do I have to live for? But I’m just too tried to care My time has now come No sense of what’s fair No longer can I run All that’s left to do Is sit down on my own No strength left for you It’s me now. All alone… |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Wow good poem, life is harsh sometimes, i can relate to the whole alone and wasted time stuff, you won't always feel that way, i hope it all changes for you really soon.  I love pancakes!!! |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
this poem was written very well! the rhyming is not forced at all and it flows very well... great write |
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