Tidle Wave of Heavenly Bliss - My duet with the imfamous Zach aka FallingRain

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Teen Poetry #8

Tidle Wave of Heavenly Bliss - My duet with the imfamous Zach aka FallingRain

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-12-01 09:33 PM

Edward and bella Pictures, Images and Photos

It doesn't take much for you..
to make my heart start a pump'n.
Your voice simply lightens up my day.
And everytime you wink at me my heart can't seem to stop a thump'n.

That warm sound of laughter
coming from your vocal chords
can't seem to let me go...
as it draws my attention to only you.

Your smile knows how to cheer me up.
And it can never do me wrong.
I don't know if this is really love
Or if I can even belong in this song.

This rythm of tenacious tones
and beautiful conversation,
makes me feel overwhelmed
with the love I feel for you.

It seems like I can do anything.
When your holding my hand.
Your always on my mind
And your even with me when I'm in dreamland.

One day I'll take you with me,
to that place where we can be only us.
No one to make us feel alone,
when we're right beside each other feeling one.

And when that day comes
And our lips crash together
Like where the tide meet's land
I'll no deep inside that we'll stay this way forever.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-12-01 09:39 PM

omgsh.... We did pretty awesome on this Julianna!!! Oh by the way I love your picture!! Not the Bella and Edward one the one of you!! Your sooooo pretty!!!

Great working with you!! And I'm not that infamous.. geesh... lol

-Zachary

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-12-01 11:06 PM

Zach- I know what parts you wrote

I enjoyed the flow of it and how it all flowed well together but you could still notice the change ups where you switched back in forth it adds character

Julianna- your parts were very nicely fitted together with the rest of the poem, I am quite impressed how you managed to work together at this..

to the both of you- WOW! bang on job and I am glad to say this was one of my favorite duets in awhile. Love poems(stories) are always more amazing when it is written from both prospectives... my first duet was a love poem.... but that was way before both of your time... man i've been here forever I love these blue pages tho..

overall great write and I hope to read more from both of you very soon.
Krysti

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-12-02 09:08 AM

thank you very much both zach and krysti!!!!! it was really fun to write this one again with you zach, can't wait to do another one!!! (and thank you for the comment on my pic, lol. it took FOREVER for it to get up there...*sighs*) thanks again both!!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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