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AcousticPen
Junior Member

since 2008-12-01

Posts 13
Florida USA

0 posted 2008-12-01 03:51 AM

When I need an outlet I grab this pen
Because it’s easier than an ear
Although I wish someone cared
I have nobody near

My heart is full and needs to vent
So here I can let it out
No more bottled feelings
No insides that scream and shout

My wounds, they can’t heal
But not fatal, I will live
My trouble is that what I get
Is not nearly what I give

I try, and try, and try my best
And give until I’ve one thing left
When I’m down to just my sanity
The one I crave commits the theft

Lured in by every attribute
From best to worst she ends in better
Than what any other girl has to offer
She could be anything if she herself would let her

The problem is not this person
But rather lies with me
I have to live without the perfection
That no one else can see

My suffering is because I care
Because I make myself have to be
Not whatever she may want
But everything she needs

-Scott Vukelic

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-12-01 08:54 AM

Welcome to Pip Scott!

Vent, get it all out

and share with us.

Please check your email for a special greeting!

Ri
Member

since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

2 posted 2008-12-01 09:37 AM

This is excellent, especially for a first post. The first stanza made me consider this myself, and i came to the conclusion that it isn't that people don't care, but writing appeals more because it doesn't offer judgement.
A great style and flows easily

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2008-12-01 07:38 PM

Awesome first post, can't wait to read more!!!

I love pancakes!!!

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-12-01 08:52 PM

Amazing stuff you got here dude!

Keep up the writing! I'll be looking foreword to more like this.. lol

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

5 posted 2008-12-01 10:15 PM

I really liked this stanza and the first one btw!
My wounds, they can’t heal
But not fatal, I will live
My trouble is that what I get
Is not nearly what I give

I loved this stanza- it just totally fit together and was so well written! Nice first post! Welcome to PIp! NIce write!
Rhia

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2008-12-01 11:16 PM

Scott, Welcome To Passions. It's great to have you here and see your kind replies to the poems.

As for your poem.. I loved it.. and you couldnt find a better place to vent PIP is the best place for that. here you are among friends(I think i stole that line from a boston pizza commercial tho) but i mean it.. Hope you write more soon. I would love to read the next piece.
Krysti

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