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Goodbye |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
When the fiercely cruel girls tried to make me crumble I plastered a smile to my face and pretended not to care. When they tore everything away from me to make me humble I stood up tall and was proud that I smiled through my tears. I wanted to run- I wanted to fall- because of you I still stood tall I wanted them to leave me alone- for the pain to end but I couldn't say let go because I needed to be your friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You were a continent a way until I finally came home Eight months of memories later - good bye meant being alone If I had truly had to watch you walk away from me ,never coming back Then I would have been broken, falling and unable to stand If there was no way you could have let me in again, too hurt and too sad There would be no reason to be proud- not what I'd planned Actually able to do my homework, not distracted because you wouldn't call Going to sleep at a normal time because we wouldn't talk for hours Wouldn't get my phone confiscated not wanting to hang up- trying to stall My favorite shows would be painful to watch because no longer ours Heart bleeding crystal tears that would freeze and never shatter A silent pain that only you would understand but I wouldn't be talking to you anymore noticing the things you notice would be way too painful to even matter You're a part of who I am and I'm afraid it will kill me inside if I have to shut that door You once told me that if I pushed you in a pool you had to pull me in too because we belonged together and thats how we always would be Best friends forever because I'm someone I don't know or like without you Saying goodbye for good would mean the person I am is no longer me I almost had to say goodbye- it almost wasn't enough-us holding on together You asked me to stop fighting for you so you could actually think I gave of my last weeks with you knowing I might end up losing you forever Today - good bye to us would take the ground from beneath my feet |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Oh WOW hunni... Love this.. it's soo true.. makes me cry cause of my sitution atm... Love it huni.. deserve's way more replies |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I'm glad you liked it.. Whats going on with you hun? email me if you want to talk or on here. [email protected] Whats going on? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oh this deserves way more replies it made me tear up and sad.. this is exactly what my sister is going through right now being away from her boyfriend and her best friend.. me being me cant really understand why. but after reading your poem i can kinda get it  thank you so much for thisKrysti |
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