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Teen Poetry #8

My Wish

rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

0 posted 2008-11-07 12:13 PM

Its times like these
I wish
I could forget
the girl I used to be.
Because times like these-
she always resurfaces,
full of thoughts
that don't belong to me.
They're full of pain,
these dreams.
Sharp things--like knives.
Confusion--but that's because
They're suicidal thoughts,
and that's not me.
Although--it used to be.
I really wish
that girl would go away--
but I have this feeling--
that she's here,
to stay.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-11-26 06:57 PM

Nice poem, sadly i can relate.

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GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2008-11-26 08:39 PM

I relate too. perfectly. It's a bad thing but i feel this way the majority of the time. like my past self is going to take over my body once again. I enjoyed how u put that feeling into words

KandyGrl511
Member

since 2008-11-30

Posts 52
Michigan

3 posted 2008-12-02 06:47 PM

i can relate to this poem.very nice job!

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