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Teen Poetry #8

A Thousand Broken Hearts

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-11-10 01:08 PM

You say you think you know me
But you can't imagen it
Don't try to sympithies me
Because you can't quite grasp it

You don't know what I've been through.
I know what its like to feel the pain of a thousand hearts.
to feel that heat-ache tear at you
Tearing you well wide apart.

I don't want your pity because it can't help me now.
I've been through the storming rain.
You might think you know how its like
But you don't even know my kind of pain.

To be dropped down
When you were once held up high.
To know what its like
To act out your life and be only left to sigh

You might think you know me
Just give it up while there's still hope
Because its not gunna help me
And there's no way for me to cope.
Sorta crappy poem if you ask me...

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-11-10 02:18 PM

Never believe you're alone...everyone feels that way. Which is horribly ironic but true none the less.

OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!!

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2008-11-26 07:12 PM

It's not crappy, its good. i've been there myself.

I love pancakes!!!

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2008-11-26 08:29 PM

i get the alone feeling. I feel it most of the time. But ur never alone. God is alwayz there..and it's not crappy tho it's not ur best.

KandyGrl511
Member

since 2008-11-30

Posts 52
Michigan

4 posted 2008-12-02 06:51 PM

that was a wonderful poem and i loved it. you're not alone, believe me.

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