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Teen Poetry #8

Good VS Evil

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-11-06 11:28 PM

White eyes,
shining into your soul.
Angelic acid,
shimmering into your veins.
Glowing wings,
falling from the sky.
Satin tears,
developing ivory faces.

Red Eyes,
bleeding into your soul.
Toxic acid,
foaming into your veins.
Black wings,
falling from the sky.
Crimson tears,
staining ebony faces.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-11-07 12:59 PM

This is an interesting piece of work you got here. I like it!

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

aimebaby
New Member

since 2008-11-01

Posts 9

2 posted 2008-11-07 07:46 PM

beautiful imagery, and interesting contrasts. great, really interesting.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2008-11-10 06:56 PM

I like the contrast! Good poem

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

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