Deeper and Deeper (a dedication to Jess)

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Teen Poetry #8

Deeper and Deeper (a dedication to Jess)

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-11-08 11:47 PM

I don't know about you guys out there. But on my side of the world its really late... And I'm exhausted from today but I'm in the mood for writing.. So here's my late night poem.

Everytime I look at you
There's always a glimmer in your eyes.
You smile with simple honesty
And your voice is a gentle lullaby.

I never knew how we got here
And could never put the pieces together
Little did I know
That we'd wined up with each other forever

You are my bestest friend
And always held an umbrella over me in the rain.
You held me tight and told me "everything was gunna be okay."
You loved me even though I was in pain

Your always there when I need you.
But you never leave my mind.
How come I can't get over this feeling
Why are these answers hard to find?

I know it sounds silly
To say I might be falling for you
I'm opening up my heart tonight
And letting you see me through.

I can't believe what is happening
It almost seems too good to be true.
That I'm lying here with you tonight
Falling even deeper in love with you.
~*This poem is dedicated to my Aussie friend Jess. To her and her fiance (sp?) Best wishes hun!*~

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-11-08 11:54 PM

Oh WOW..

Thankyou hunni. made me cry..

*Tears*

Love u hunni u have such a good heart

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-11-10 05:48 PM

awee Zach this is such a sweet sweet poem I loved it!!
Krysti

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