The Forever Reoccurring Tale of Misery

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Teen Poetry #8

The Forever Reoccurring Tale of Misery

Jrocc
New Member

since 2008-10-28

Posts 7
Australia, Vic

0 posted 2008-10-28 02:31 AM

And behind the seem less unharmed face
Were those melted eyes
The kind of eyes that would tell a story
Of old
And that you could almost hear screaming
“Help!”
But at the same time
Find happiness in the
Forever reoccurring tale of her misery

Then to turn and look at the next person
And find the exact same look
Of the
Forever reoccurring tale of misery
Like it is almost a culture
To leave what is inside to stay inside
And live life like a written play,
Where even though it may be bad
What is around the corner is known
And will slowly effect the soul
Less
And less…

Until the person is hard inside
And when they realize who they are
What is left?

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2008-10-30 12:04 PM

there were some good ideas in here. the first few lines didn't make much sense to me, but I think you might have gotten some words jumbled or something.

And find the exact same look
Of the
Forever reoccurring tale of misery
Like it is almost a culture

this bit was quite brilliant.

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