»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #8
»
Not Yet!
| Teen Poetry #8 |
|
Not Yet! |
|
|
My_Innocents_Interupted17 New Member
since 2008-10-09
Posts 2mn |
NOT YET!!! writen 9-6-08 I'm not ready to let this go, i've just started bia. he screwed me over, over more than i imagined. so now i'm here, i'm the one thats angry and upset. sometimes i just want to scream so loud, And break stuff and tare my skin in half. It's under my skin so deep eating at me, waiting for me to explode. It gets at me when i least exspect it, When i sleep. Dance away the bad, And dwell in my anger. I just want to run away from it, Escape my life every minutes. But thinking about it, Only makes it all much more possible for me to do. I cant stand being in my body, I want to ripe it off me. i feel sick to my stomache, Want to puck my guts out. I dont want to deal with this, Just want to throw it in a closet. Let me live my life the way i did before him, Let me go back to the hell i lived. I would rather, than to think about hgim. |
||
| © Copyright 2008 Elise Miller - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Lots of emotion. Good job! "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
||
|
aimebaby New Member
since 2008-11-01
Posts 9 |
really great. its basically every emotion i feel when i'm frustrated, and put into words. |
||
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I agree with the others. Nice emotion in this poem. -Zach "I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!" |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
