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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-11-03 08:50 AM


My head is spinning round and round
My heart aches out in pain
I’m choking on my own words,
And you’re driving me insane

You’re standing at the chapel
Your hair a faded brown
Your smile worth a million dollars
Oh god you’re bringing me down

We were lovers back in high school
Til you went and left
You broke my heart in pieces
And we’ll forget the rest

Now I’m sitting in a church
And you’re marrying this girl
I’m sitting next to the man I love
But you make my stomach whirl

My heart skipped a beat or too
When she walked down the aisle
How come it wasn’t me up their?
Was I not worth the while?

So tell me why I ache inside
When we’ve been mates for a year
Why is that marrying her?
Brings me down in fear

I’m walking to my front door
Pregnant and upset
Another day to write away
Another memory to forget

The pictures up the hallway
Bring me to the floor
I sit against the wall and cry
I can’t take it anymore

So tell me where I stuffed up
When I have this amazing life
This amazing family
I’m about to be a wife

So tell me is this karma
Did I deserve this too?
I love my fiancé so much
So why the hell, do I love you


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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.
1 posted 2008-11-03 12:06 PM


Powerfull stuff. It's great. I'm sorry if this is all true. I suppose there isn't much you can do. Just work you way through it. Keep writing.
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-11-04 04:48 PM


Ah Jess...This was an amazing poem. I mean an abosulutely astounding "Where do I buy the book?" type poem!

I can't say I can empathize completely but I think I know what you're going through. It's going to hurt, and I don't know how to make it hurt less. Focus on the love you have, keep walking forward and don't allow yourself to think of anything else.
It WILL go away. It'll just take time.

OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!!

Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
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Small town, Illinois
3 posted 2008-11-04 05:58 PM


Aww honey! This poem was amazing!!.. -sigh- like usual.. hehe.. I agree.. It'll go away. You and your fiance are a lovely couple and I'm sure you love him unconditionally. Hold your head up high and keep walking forward.

"The reason why God put our eyes in front because it is more important to look ahead than to look back."

Sending love your way,
-Zachy... XD hehe

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

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