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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-10-11 09:05 PM

You don't understand
Because your unfamiliar to lies
Its killing me inside
Can't you see past my cold eyes?

Caged by this secret
Butterfly in a net
Your too oblivious
But your heart was set

I lie to you
And you kept smiling all along.
Doesn't this bother you?
I guess I was wrong.

I can see this is bothering you
Although your playing my very own game.
Lying to my face.
Its all the same.

The pain is hidden in your eyes.
And the truth was more then you can bear.
I use to see you lite up.
But Now I can barely see a flare

I'm sorry that your hurting.
Trust me your not the only one.
but you have to understand.
This doesn't have to be your burden..

This is one secret
That will be locked up tight in my heart.
Because I'd rather suffer eternity
Then to see you to be broken apart.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-10-11 11:20 PM

This poem is, once again, sorta about me being bi and me not being able to open up and tell my friends on who i am. And how I felt trapped about not being able to cause of all the pressure. I know this poem is sorta confusing so I'm just telling you guys that so you won't be too confused.. Thanks for reading.. if you did.. Later!

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-10-11 11:49 PM

See this is exactly what I mean.
Zach that was awesome! And I think it's great you're using poetry as an outlet, I know it realy helps me.

OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!!

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2008-10-12 02:35 AM

"This is one secret
That will be locked tight in my heart.
Because I'd rather suffer an eternity
Then to see you to be broken apart."

That my gorgeous Zach, Is the work of a poet master.

No matter who you are, what race what colour what sexual orientation. Don't let these dark day's define the person your set to become and those friends that look at u in a way that makes you ashamed to be who you are.. They will never know true greatness for the greatness you have behind those gorgeous eyes proves that even people like you can be hero's.

No matter what becomes of you Zach. Your still one heart and that heart will grow stronger n beat harder than you of all people ever imagined possible.

xx

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-10-12 03:49 PM

Nicely done and I didn't think it was confusing at all, I liked it very much.
Library.

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