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Don't Let Me Go!
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Don't Let Me Go! |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Can you make the pain, go away Wash the tears off my face Take my life back to, okay Move me to another place Hold me tight Don't let me go Even if I fight Let your love show Can you tell me I'm fine I'm not ruining my life Tell me it's the right time Please grab my hand, take the knife Hold me tight Don't let me run We both know it's right But I like to leave things, undone Don't let me screw it all up Touch my wounds, with your hand Emotional pain is not enough Only you can understand Hold me tight Don't let me leave Staying isn't in my might So don't let go, I plead Tell me you'll be there No matter what I do Cause you know, I care Always and only for you "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"Tell me you'll be there No matter what I do Cause you know, I care Always and only for you" Great poem! but the flow became a little off when you said "only for you" I think it would sound better without the "for". Otherwise this poem is great! -Zach "I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!" |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
nice one to read indeed...great job... ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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